Business Plan feedback

The first bit of feedback I received was to hone my summary a bit more make it completely straight to the point, say what my agenda is and why this product is needed in society, this is very important in a summary because it's essential to be 100 percent clear about what motives you have and why you're doing something.

Another piece of feedback I received was to do with my finance section. I need to find similar projects and find out how they're funded, this will show evidence that It could work for my project, for example, things like crowd funding. Also having endorsements from other well known businesses adds a lot of legitimacy to my brand and it make it more appealing to investors. It's all about making your business seem as legit and appealing as possible. But it all comes down to why people should invest in my company instead of someone else's.

the feedback I received on my logo was brief but they said it "looks great"

I have now made all appropriate changes to my business plan   

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